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| Tweet Topic Started: Oct 19 2005, 03:18 PM (253 Views) | |
| Tanpopo | Oct 19 2005, 03:18 PM Post #1 |
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this is a song/poem i wrote for my lovey garrett Can't you understand that Im yours now You have me, i have you They have my past You have my future Our love will last Forever more Can't you understand my love for you is growing more and more every day I love you You love me Lets be together for eternity Can't you understand I need you Life without you would be cruel I want you in my life I need you in my life You keep me alive You give me hope You stop me from crying Can't you understand we're perfect together Can't you understand we're growing together Our lives are one Forever more Can't you understand? |
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| Special Forces | Oct 19 2005, 03:24 PM Post #2 |
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Good poem. I found one (well two) errors in it...
I believe the correct spelling is we're. It's really good, the rhyme scheme is flowing. |
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| Tanpopo | Oct 19 2005, 03:27 PM Post #3 |
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lol ty i didnt notice the ' missing
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| jappyx | Oct 20 2005, 04:26 AM Post #4 |
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GaGaGa ™
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That's so nice!
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| Hammerlock Jones | Oct 20 2005, 06:54 AM Post #5 |
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That's Beautiful. |
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