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Cant you understand?
Topic Started: Oct 19 2005, 03:18 PM (253 Views)
Tanpopo
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this is a song/poem i wrote for my lovey garrett :wub:

Can't you understand that Im yours now
You have me, i have you
They have my past
You have my future
Our love will last
Forever more

Can't you understand my love for you is growing
more and more
every day
I love you
You love me
Lets be together for eternity

Can't you understand I need you
Life without you would be cruel
I want you in my life
I need you in my life
You keep me alive
You give me hope
You stop me from crying

Can't you understand we're perfect together
Can't you understand we're growing together
Our lives are one
Forever more
Can't you understand?
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Special Forces
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Good poem. I found one (well two) errors in it...

Quote:
 
Cant you understand were perfect together
Cant you understand were growing together


I believe the correct spelling is we're.

It's really good, the rhyme scheme is flowing.
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Tanpopo
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lol ty i didnt notice the ' missing :P
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jappyx
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That's so nice! :)
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Hammerlock Jones
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That's Beautiful.
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