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...I tried...; lol
Topic Started: Jun 4 2004, 10:07 PM (216 Views)
Bry
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Owell...
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Chrisopher
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I dont like it very much :(
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Sam
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Its not horrible, but it's not good. You definately need a border to go around it though.
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Ken
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ok, not bad, first off, the text is definitly legible... but the quality looks bad (for example look at the right side of the Y), a border would be definitly great. this is just my opinion, by maybe try lowering the occupacy of those lines, they almost steal too much attention from other parts of the gfx.
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Jared-ZNR
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Text needs work, it's choppy...the whole thing needs a border. It's kind of plain.
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Hollow-ZNR
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i would recommend bry, that you get some good brushes, Deviantart.com has some great ones. that way, you can do some better effects and designs.
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IcedBlade
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it would be alot better with a boarder. and maybe a new text.
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Simon
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bleh..
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Jared
Jun 5 2004, 04:25 AM
Text needs work, it's choppy...the whole thing needs a border. It's kind of plain.

I agree with Jared :blush:
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Stary
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Ken
Jun 5 2004, 04:23 AM
ok, not bad, first off, the text is definitly legible... but the quality looks bad (for example look at the right side of the Y), a border would be definitly great. this is just my opinion, by maybe try lowering the occupacy of those lines, they almost steal too much attention from other parts of the gfx.

that would have sounded great if you'd said opacity instead of occupacy.

the text needs some work, try addin a small stroke to it or somethin, and slightly lowering the opacity. add a border round all of it. perhaps you should look at a few tut's and get some more help with backgrounds n stuff. keep tryin :)
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Hollow-ZNR
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yea, it isnt that bad. it just needs some minor adjustments. do what stary said, and maybe touch it up with some brushes and filters.
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