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Intensify
Topic Started: Aug 14 2004, 11:25 PM (259 Views)
mightymouse-ZNR
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http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/9787443/

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Sanoske
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The black as the bg ruins it all...
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skip
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The black doesn't ruin it that much... What I don't like is the wheat-ish ray thing.. You know what I'm talking about? It'd be better if you kept teh crystal cheme all throught.
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Order Of Thy Phoenix
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Its a tad plain and you've done better but I like it :D
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^Ditto.
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Stary
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not bad. but you've done better :)
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EvilGenius
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i like it
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Pretty nice, could use some spicing-up in the background though. If anything kills tis piece, it's the empty background.
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Sanoske
Aug 15 2004, 06:33 AM
The black as the bg ruins it all...

i agree, the background color isnt going very well with the render.. :r
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Simon
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bleh..
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Render is very cool, though it is a bit plain imo
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Crimson
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mmmm... i like it... but not your best like others said...

~ Crimson
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mightymouse-ZNR
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Haha, as most of you have realized, my art is seemingly deteriorating in quality.

This is a stage where an artist must look for new ways to express him/herself. You see, I've been experimenting different ways, i.e. incorporating photography into abstracts, new colours, unique ways of presenting an abstract. In this case, I decided to leave out a background, and make the middle object seem intensified. Hence the "Intensify".

I make art to please myself, and I show it to hope to please others. I really liked this piece becuase of how i managed to concentrate all the activity in the middle, and I also changed my brushing technique, as well as my rendering technique.

I guess next time I'll make all changes mucho more obvious.
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Robert
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I like the middle but that's about it :P

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Max
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I don't like it, and I'll tell you why. It's plain, really plain. I'm serious, it's really really plain, it's just basic black around the render and brushing. The brushing is also not to impressive compared to your other pieces. The render is not too good as well. That blurry thingy isn't working neither.
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Robert
Aug 15 2004, 11:59 PM
I like the middle but that's about it :P

Ditto :huh:
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