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| Tweet Topic Started: Sep 6 2004, 09:48 AM (350 Views) | |
| Freezefire44 | Sep 6 2004, 09:48 AM Post #1 |
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Goodbye SZ.
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This is the first space scene i've ever done, i'm sure people will find something wrong with it, but i like it C & C plz!http://www.deviantart.com/view/10396212/ |
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| Darkshrimp | Sep 6 2004, 09:50 AM Post #2 |
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if in doubt, love
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can't see it, guess i gota wait |
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| Genotik. | Sep 6 2004, 09:51 AM Post #3 |
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they ckall me arcadia
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Give us a direct link to the image because deviantART is going under brief matinence. |
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| Freezefire44 | Sep 6 2004, 09:51 AM Post #4 |
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Goodbye SZ.
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http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v326/Fre.../SpaceScene.gif |
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| Darkshrimp | Sep 6 2004, 09:54 AM Post #5 |
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if in doubt, love
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um..dont' like the lens flare, the word space are pretty cool, liked the planet but not the texture. |
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| Genotik. | Sep 6 2004, 09:54 AM Post #6 |
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they ckall me arcadia
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It needs more to it and the lens flare is overwhelming the image with brightness. |
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| Jarret | Sep 6 2004, 09:54 AM Post #7 |
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The text sucks and the planets feel to plain. |
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| Freezefire44 | Sep 6 2004, 09:57 AM Post #8 |
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Goodbye SZ.
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okay.. thanks?
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| Stary | Sep 6 2004, 10:15 AM Post #9 |
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the planet texture is too dull and repetetive, no variation in it = bad dnt really like the lens flare or the font either sorry but, it is your first, so there is plenty of time to improve
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| Freezefire44 | Sep 6 2004, 10:17 AM Post #10 |
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Goodbye SZ.
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thanks, i think Stary
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| Stary | Sep 6 2004, 10:18 AM Post #11 |
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maybe check DA for some good planet textures, i'm sure they have some
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| Freezefire44 | Sep 6 2004, 10:22 AM Post #12 |
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Goodbye SZ.
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alrighty, thanks. |
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| Metabolic | Sep 6 2004, 10:52 AM Post #13 |
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Shrinking Universe
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Needs lots of improvement. The lens flare doensn't look good. The dots also don't look good. The planets need work. The Star Wars text also needs changing. Sorry. |
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| Freezefire44 | Sep 6 2004, 10:53 AM Post #14 |
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Goodbye SZ.
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those "dots" are stars.. no problem, 'tis a first anyways
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| Flip'd monK | Sep 6 2004, 11:21 AM Post #15 |
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Scottish Samurai
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Yes it's good for a first, but it could do with improvement
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C & C plz!






dnt really like the lens flare or the font either sorry

10:32 AM Jul 11