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My first Ever Space Scene
Topic Started: Sep 6 2004, 09:48 AM (348 Views)
Freezefire44
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This is the first space scene i've ever done, i'm sure people will find something wrong with it, but i like it :D C & C plz!

http://www.deviantart.com/view/10396212/
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Darkshrimp
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can't see it, guess i gota wait
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Genotik.
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Give us a direct link to the image because deviantART is going under brief matinence.
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Freezefire44
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http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v326/Fre.../SpaceScene.gif
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Darkshrimp
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um..dont' like the lens flare, the word space are pretty cool, liked the planet but not the texture.
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Genotik.
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It needs more to it and the lens flare is overwhelming the image with brightness.
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The text sucks and the planets feel to plain.
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Freezefire44
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okay.. thanks? :/
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Stary
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the planet texture is too dull and repetetive, no variation in it = bad :( dnt really like the lens flare or the font either sorry :( but, it is your first, so there is plenty of time to improve :)
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Freezefire44
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thanks, i think Stary :D
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Stary
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maybe check DA for some good planet textures, i'm sure they have some :)
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Freezefire44
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alrighty, thanks.
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Metabolic
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Needs lots of improvement. The lens flare doensn't look good. The dots also don't look good. The planets need work. The Star Wars text also needs changing. Sorry.
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Freezefire44
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those "dots" are stars..

no problem, 'tis a first anyways :D
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Yes it's good for a first, but it could do with improvement :)
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