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| Poppy1's Poems; A poem/song by Poppy1 | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Mar 13 2005, 04:07 PM (634 Views) | |
| Clair | Mar 13 2005, 04:07 PM Post #1 |
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I wrote this a couple of years ago, originally for the acoustic guitar which I play but it works as a poem too. Enjoy Summer haze (The good old days) Still waters and blue skies, Summer breeze and lullabys Walks in the park with my love Lazy days and the sky above Neverending days Summer Haze Rainbow Sky I'm on a high Hear the tree's and feel the breeze, Scenic views, wine and cheese Golden sky as the sun goes down The perfect day in the old town Neverending days Summer haze rainbow sky I'm on a high © 2003-2005 CMC |
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| Sw33t_DreamZ | Mar 13 2005, 04:12 PM Post #2 |
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Busy Momma
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Heya I like it smooth flowing and sweet I can almost hear the music going with it as I read it
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| Lisi | Mar 13 2005, 04:13 PM Post #3 |
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Wow, that is pretty good. |
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| Clair | Mar 13 2005, 04:15 PM Post #4 |
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I've got more, some people think I should get them published but I haven't done so yet. Maybe I'll post some more for you Thanks :blush: |
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| Kanashimi | Mar 13 2005, 04:16 PM Post #5 |
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Healing of Harms
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I like it. The way it flows is nice. |
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| Lady Luck | Mar 13 2005, 04:16 PM Post #6 |
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Very Nice Poppy1. I like it !
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| Sw33t_DreamZ | Mar 13 2005, 04:17 PM Post #7 |
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do so if you want, if I can get my act around to it I'll post a few of my own as well I'm sure some of the SZ oldtimers might recognize a few of them but for all you newbies well I think I will. And I repeat MORE WANT MORE!!!!!!
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| Company Ninja | Mar 13 2005, 04:19 PM Post #8 |
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The New Classic.
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Lawlaoloalowloalowloalowoalowlolo Its cool. |
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| newmanin | Mar 13 2005, 04:20 PM Post #9 |
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I like the rhythm and the tone. |
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| Clair | Mar 13 2005, 04:21 PM Post #10 |
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Thanks! You want more, here you go.. The perfect Day Lets take a walk just me and you Lets breath in the air and enjoy the view Lets lay in the grass and stare at the sun Lets listen to the birds and have some fun Lets walk hand in hand and hold each other tight Lets look at the stars all through the night Lets look at the moon in the sky of midnight blue Lets fall asleep together until the night is through © C.M.C 2004-2005 |
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| Company Ninja | Mar 13 2005, 04:22 PM Post #11 |
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Didn't like, sorry. |
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| Clair | Mar 13 2005, 04:26 PM Post #12 |
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This one is quite sad but one of my favourites From the heart. Take me back to the place, where I was happy take me back to the place, I belonged let the sun shine in my face again let me be, let me be me again Lets go back, in history making daisy chains in the summer lets find a breeze, to fly a kite when everything, everything was alright I remember, the man in the moon I remember, the stars in the sky I used to count them, when I was a little girl now my stars, dont seem to shine Something in me died, all those years ago Someone took away my sun Do they know, what they have done to me do they realise its gone How could they throw away the child in me.. its gone forever.. let me be me again © C.M.C 2004-2005 Edit: This was another one I wrote for my Acoustic guitar, its a very soft melody and works well as a song too.
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| Company Ninja | Mar 13 2005, 04:30 PM Post #13 |
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Dito, again, sorry. |
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| Clair | Mar 13 2005, 04:31 PM Post #14 |
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Fair enough, you are the first person to say that though. So one in many is good with me
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| red wiz | Mar 13 2005, 04:35 PM Post #15 |
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very very good. i enjoyed it. ur very good at rhymes. |
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