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Poppy1's Poems; A poem/song by Poppy1
Topic Started: Mar 13 2005, 04:07 PM (638 Views)
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thanks I liked them both :) very much
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Surferdude
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Very nice Poppy... we should have a poetry contest here sometime. Alot of good talent
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Thanks and yes to that :yes:
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very cool, and girly! (this forum needs girly atm... too many guys around :angel: )

I also vote back the valentines day skin ;)

Got any more?
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Cool stuff, I guess. [/trend]
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Sweet 16 - Thanks and yes I have more.. based on real events like all my poetry :)


The Haunting

The old house in the park has a haunting chill
as I open the door and look all around
the echos of the past are in there still
theres no-one around, there's no-one around

Through the door and up the stairs
the wooden floor is cold and bare
the eyes on the wall follow my steps
theres nobody there, theres nobody there

Walls of faces from the past
a time of a bygone era
but a presence that is always to last
its getting clearer, its getting clearer

Whats that over there? did it just move
nevermind go into the bedroom
the four poster bed with a crimson spread
theres something about this room

Next to the bed there is a cradle
inside a blanket of white
I'm nowhere near it, yet it moves
it almost gave me a fright

Back out of the room I look around me
and I see a little girl about 5
her face is ashen and sad
its obvious she isn't alive

She was the girl that moved the cradle
she was rocking it, she was playing
I'm looking at her, and I'm wondering
what it is she is saying

Then as quick as she came she went
her spirit is in another room
down the stairs we go and into the study
this is quite clearly the house of doom

What happened to that girl I wonder I wonder
why did she come to me?
the sadness in her eyes
was very plain to see

One day I must go back
into the house so haunting and cold
and see the little girl with her teddy
because in that house there is a tale to be told.

© C.M.C 2005
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its an interesting/haunting poem the feel of it jumps off the page at me :) yet again another good one :D
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Thanks Kate :blush:

Heres another :D

Ok this is a light hearted poem, can be sung along to the tune of 'Private Dancer' by Tina Turner

Private Eater

I have a cheese roll and a donught
I have a can of pepsi too

A bag of KP and a bhaji
I guess I want a vodka too

I'm your private eater
eating for nothing
eating in front of tv

Just a private eater
eating for pleasure
eating what makes me happy

I'd like a mince pie with dairy cream
Maybe a glass of red wine too

Doritos, dips and peanuts
A lovely glass of lager too

I'm a private eater
eating for nothing
Its something theres no reason for

If a private eater
isnt actually hungry
what are they eating for...

A pickle and an ice-cream
strawberry mousse will do nicely thank you
its doing nothing for my figure
so tell me do you want extra fries with that? ooh

I go to the scales, let out a sigh
and I ask myself, why oh why

If I am not actually hungry
then why am I doing this to me

I'm a private eater
eating for nothing
its just a complete waste of time

Just a private eater
not being healthy
will shorten this life of mine

© C.M.C 2004-2005

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thanks for the good laugh :lol: :yes: I liked it
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no problem :D
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Good job, very nice and smooth poppy :).
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Thanks, heres another for ya :)

This has a rather sad meaning to it.

Loyal Friend

I was just five years old
when Dad brought you home
someone had abandoned you
in the park all alone

You fitted in straight away
I loved you so very much
the way you would play
and how soft you were to touch

A gentle soul who would do no harm
I would hug you when I was down
when nobody seemed to understand
You was always around

But then suddenly we were in hell
you became withdrawn and too sad to play
because the man who controlled us
took it all away

One day, I kissed you goodbye
patted you and hugged you tight
I went to school as normal
but something didn't feel right

As I walked up the stairs
and into the home that was our hell
I walked with dread and fear
because something wasn't right, I could tell

I walked past the kitchen
where you would lay your head on your bed
and my stepfather said "go and feed the dog"
but then laughed, because my dog was dead

He had decided you was in the way
and brought your life to an end
I miss you and I promise
that in heaven we'll meet again my loyal friend

© C.M.C 2004-2005
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i like the haunting one. scary.
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Nice poems, I liked them. :D
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well written and alittle on the scary side (for me anyways) I liked it alot :yes:
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