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| Poppy1's Poems; A poem/song by Poppy1 | |
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| Psuedonym. | Mar 14 2005, 02:31 PM Post #31 |
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Very nice, better than I could do, noice job. |
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| leviathan | Mar 14 2005, 02:53 PM Post #32 |
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Very nice poems, you have talent. |
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| Brandon-ZNR | Mar 14 2005, 03:10 PM Post #33 |
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Nice. Very talented :). |
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| Sw33t_DreamZ | Mar 14 2005, 03:26 PM Post #34 |
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ahhh the great one has spoken now you know you have done well Poppy *thumbs up*
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| Clair | Mar 14 2005, 03:33 PM Post #35 |
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Wow thanks! *blushes* :blush: |
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| Kamikaze_kaitou | Mar 15 2005, 01:43 PM Post #36 |
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wow!!! awesome poems you have there!!!!! |
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| Clair | Mar 15 2005, 02:12 PM Post #37 |
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*blush* wow everyone, sure means alot to read such lovely feedback on my work :blush: Thanks :blush: |
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| megrulz | Mar 15 2005, 06:01 PM Post #38 |
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Poem- great job
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| D.B. | Mar 15 2005, 06:04 PM Post #39 |
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Heh, I like it. It could actually make a good pop/rock song. |
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| Clair | Mar 15 2005, 06:32 PM Post #40 |
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Thanks :blush: I do actually have the melody to it too, as I was writing it I could hear it in my head so got my acoustic out and there it was :blush: Someone said to me this next one would be good for a greetings card. You were always in my thoughts When people kept us away and the minutes turned to hours I want you to know You were always in my thoughts When the laughter was replaced with sadness and tears I want you to know You were always in my thoughts When you was feeling hurt and thoughts of confusion filled your mind I want you to know You were always in my thoughts When you were sitting there thinking of the good times I want you to know I was thinking of them too When all that you wanted was a message of hello I want you to know I wanted to give it to you When you have read this I hope you understand You mean more to me than you will ever know. © C.M.C 2005 |
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| Sw33t_DreamZ | Mar 16 2005, 10:41 AM Post #41 |
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I like it alot it's touching, short, sweet and right to the point
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| Kamikaze_kaitou | Mar 18 2005, 02:59 PM Post #42 |
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I LOVE IT!!!! ITS AWESOME!! AND SOOOOOOO ROMANTIC *sweatdrop* |
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| Clair | Mar 18 2005, 03:07 PM Post #43 |
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Thanks! Although it isn't a romantic one, I wrote it for a friend of mine but I can see why you thought that. No, shes female for one thing and we're close but not that close Will post more soon Edited to add this poem Somewhere..over the rainbow Somewhere over the rainbow are there skies so blue will there be open arms to welcome us into? Somewhere soft and warm to keep us safe from harm and a friendly smile and a voice so calm? Somewhere where pain ceases to exist and our problems go away is that how it is? Somewhere over the rainbow does heaven lie beyond where all the angels live is that what happens when we are gone? Somewhere over the rainbow where you can touch the clouds above and the birds sing their angel song is it a place full of love? Somewhere over the rainbow where the stars shine like diamonds in the sky I want to reach out and give them to you is that what happens when we die? Inside our hearts lives a pot of gold the pot of gold at the end of the rainbow is our spirits and the memories that we hold Somewhere, one day over the rainbow where the light shines bright I will give to you my pot of gold and guard you by day and night © C.M.C 2004-2005 |
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| Lucius | Mar 18 2005, 03:12 PM Post #44 |
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Well written. The style is a little blunt- for the feelings it seems you are intending to convey I suggest more imagery and diction. |
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| Clair | Mar 18 2005, 03:15 PM Post #45 |
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Thanks, but they are fine as they are I have to say also that I disagree with you on thinking they are blunt. I write my poems when I 'feel' them and so there is alot of depth in them and nobody so far hasn't got that but thanks for your feedback anyway
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