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Poppy1's Poems; A poem/song by Poppy1
Topic Started: Mar 13 2005, 04:07 PM (637 Views)
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Very nice, better than I could do, noice job.
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Very nice poems, you have talent.
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Nice. Very talented :).
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ahhh the great one has spoken :D :yes: :D now you know you have done well Poppy *thumbs up*
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Wow thanks! *blushes* :blush:
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wow!!! awesome poems you have there!!!!!
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*blush* wow everyone, sure means alot to read such lovely feedback on my work :blush: Thanks :blush:
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Mar 13 2005, 08:07 PM
I wrote this a couple of years ago, originally for the acoustic guitar which I play but it works as a poem too. Enjoy :)


Summer haze (The good old days)


Still waters and blue skies,
Summer breeze and lullabys
Walks in the park with my love
Lazy days and the sky above

Neverending days
Summer Haze
Rainbow Sky
I'm on a high

Hear the tree's and feel the breeze,
Scenic views, wine and cheese
Golden sky as the sun goes down
The perfect day in the old town

Neverending days
Summer haze
rainbow sky
I'm on a high

© 2003-2005 CMC

Poem- :yes:
great job :)
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Heh, I like it. It could actually make a good pop/rock song.
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Thanks :blush:

I do actually have the melody to it too, as I was writing it I could hear it in my head so got my acoustic out and there it was :blush:

Someone said to me this next one would be good for a greetings card.

You were always in my thoughts

When people kept us away
and the minutes turned to hours
I want you to know
You were always in my thoughts

When the laughter was replaced
with sadness and tears
I want you to know
You were always in my thoughts

When you was feeling hurt
and thoughts of confusion filled your mind
I want you to know
You were always in my thoughts

When you were sitting there
thinking of the good times
I want you to know
I was thinking of them too

When all that you wanted
was a message of hello
I want you to know
I wanted to give it to you

When you have read this
I hope you understand
You mean more to me
than you will ever know.


© C.M.C 2005
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I like it alot it's touching, short, sweet and right to the point :)
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I LOVE IT!!!! ITS AWESOME!! AND SOOOOOOO ROMANTIC *sweatdrop*
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Thanks! Although it isn't a romantic one, I wrote it for a friend of mine but I can see why you thought that. No, shes female for one thing and we're close but not that close :P


Will post more soon


Edited to add this poem :)


Somewhere..over the rainbow

Somewhere over the rainbow
are there skies so blue
will there be open arms
to welcome us into?

Somewhere soft and warm
to keep us safe from harm
and a friendly smile
and a voice so calm?

Somewhere where pain
ceases to exist
and our problems go away
is that how it is?

Somewhere over the rainbow
does heaven lie beyond
where all the angels live
is that what happens when we are gone?


Somewhere over the rainbow
where you can touch the clouds above
and the birds sing their angel song
is it a place full of love?

Somewhere over the rainbow
where the stars shine like diamonds in the sky
I want to reach out and give them to you
is that what happens when we die?

Inside our hearts
lives a pot of gold
the pot of gold at the end of the rainbow
is our spirits and the memories that we hold

Somewhere, one day over the rainbow
where the light shines bright
I will give to you my pot of gold
and guard you by day and night

© C.M.C 2004-2005
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Well written. The style is a little blunt- for the feelings it seems you are intending to convey I suggest more imagery and diction.
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Lucius
Mar 18 2005, 07:12 PM
Well written. The style is a little blunt- for the feelings it seems you are intending to convey I suggest more imagery and diction.



Thanks, but they are fine as they are :) I have to say also that I disagree with you on thinking they are blunt. I write my poems when I 'feel' them and so there is alot of depth in them and nobody so far hasn't got that but thanks for your feedback anyway :)
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