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| Secrets Held Whithin; a story. | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Jun 17 2005, 02:10 PM (600 Views) | |
| Zythion | Jun 17 2005, 02:10 PM Post #1 |
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Sānhéhuì - 三合會i
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Secrets held within. © Zythion-Oliver Ballard. 2005 Hey, I am Christine. I have dark curly hair. I am tallish…well normal height. I am 19. I have a new job, which is very good because my parents were thrown out of there jobs. But, that’s not included in my story, so I guess I must start telling you about it. Anyways, I was strolling down Junkyard Avenue, when a sparkle caught my eye behind the big oak tree. I went over, and couldn’t see anything. I thought it was unusual and it was just an eye trick but as I was leaving it, I saw a shadow; it looked like a large doorway. I turned around and I saw a big glitter mass, I was pretty scared and ran all the back home, hoping it wasn’t following me and it was just a trick of the eye. Well, when I got home, my mother was saying I was acting strange, as if I was spell bound to something. I have to admit, I was feeling strange. I kept on having this tug on my heart, only faint. The scary thing was though, that it was tugging in the direction of Junkyard Avenue. I just thought it was me, until when I got to bed, I heard voices in my head. Something was pulling me, and it was getting stronger and stronger. I quickly got my clothes on. By this time, it was hurting. So I decided to walk in the direction of the pull, to see if it would do any good. I stumbled down the steps, and went straight through the kitchen door. That is the point where it started getting better. But I started to carry on. I went all the way to Junkyard Avenue and there it was. Looming over me. Here, I could smell a sweet aroma; I could still hear faint voices in my head. I was rather cold there too. To be continued… Please post below whether I should carry on and whether you like it. Thanks for your time. Zythion Continued: I touched it, and it felt warm, like it was trying to be caring. I decided to put my hand through, which was strange because it didn’t come through the other side, on the other side, my fingers felt hot, as if they were in a hot summers day. Which was strange since it was winter. Then, there was a tug on my arm, I was being pulled in! I tried to pull away, but there was no point. At this point, I blacked out. When I awoke, I was in a heated room with a man floating on the other side; he looked like a ghost from a film I watched it was called Casper the ghost. Well, this was strange. So I pretended to be knocked out still. Until I could hear a clear voice. “I know you are awake. We shall not harm you, but you need to trust us, to survive in this place. There will be a great storm, not one that you have ever experienced in your vile world. But a heat storm, heat storms are huge electrical surges, which cause incredible heat. They made us like this, before we were like you, only we are the outcasts. Those of us that have survived the great storms, look just like me, identical but with different voice sounds. If you are to survive the storm, you must find two of these things; a golden leaf, and a light blue bird. Both of these are hard to get, and since you came through the portal, you can’t go back. This was a task set for you. It will be a hard journey to get these two things, but we will aid you in any way.” Now, at this I started to cry. “ I sense that you are scared, kind lady, but if you do find these magical sacred items, your reward will be huge. You will be covering yourself from the storm, whilst helping us.” After this, he told me to follow him. I did as I was told, since it was all very strange. He took me to an enclosed room, at the back of what you could call their house. Continued:..... “Here, is your guide” he told me, whilst producing a kind of large rabbit. “He is called Rambo, if you call him anything else, he will get angry, and when you get smalza’s angry, they tear you apart. The good thing about smalzas is that they have a very vast knowledge of Zotan, which is this planet. They can be the best companions, if you use their real names. So, this is your guide, he knows of the golden leaves and the one Blue bird. He has seen them. He will protect you and keep you well nourished. Well, anyway. You will need this” with that, he produced a small gold necklace. “ With this, you can keep in touch with me anywhere. The final thing that you will receive off me to help you on your journey is this:” With that he produced a staff. “This magical staff, will help you with light, it can cover you from sleet. (We have an awful lot of sleet..) It has more properties, but we have not discovered them all yet. You will be trained quickly and efficiently to use this. It is powerful, and on your journey, you are bound to keep it with you. You will also, always learn new enchantments to use. Now though, we shall take you to the Grand master. He is old and is called Talher” He then took me out of the room, I gathered the staff and put the necklace on whilst Rambo followed behind me. We turned left down one corridor, past 17 doors. Then, we turned right and looked around in delight. The room was massive, with great decoration. All around there was Sky blue shields hung on the wall. “Ahh I see you like the holy shields? Yes, blue is the sacred colour of Zotan. Well, I am the grandmaster of these halls. I suppose you need me to teach you the ability to use the staff? Well come over here.” That was really strange, it wasn’t someone speaking out loud, it was in my head, but not my voice. I wandered around, until a little creature with long ears, poked out. He was all wrinkly, and had large grey eyes. “Its ok, I am a Slixor, I can read minds and talk to things through telepathy.” Continued... I was wandering whether this Slixor could be the grand master, when he told me himself, that he was. He then took me over to this corner where there was a seat. He told me to sit down and relax. Here, I was very nervous. Because he started to go in a trance, and my head filled up like bubbles. I was about to explode when it all stopped. I sat up and he merely blinked at me. This is what he then told me, “ I have taught you everything I know about the staffs. I also bunched your memory up, so it is more organised. You also know how to use telepathy. You were a quick user and so, easy. You are going to succeed in this journey, because you have an advantage to the others. Yes, we have taken 6 others from your world to help us. Each has died early on. You are different, your mind is not crammed, and it is quiet and peaceful. This will always help you, and it is a great quality.” When he had finished, he blinked and vanished. I took my staff, which by the way, is the size of a perfect walking stick for me. I looked at it, and suddenly I realised, I did know everything. But it came automatically to me, just like walking. I never had to think about using it, I just did. So, I started walking to a Blue tablet, when Rambo turned up. He smiled to me, because he knew I had learnt everything. I started using my telepathy to him, “Rambo, What does this tablet say?” He shuddered, and told me. “It tells us of the past, our past is dreadful, the gillians, those were evil beings trying to take us all out. They made the great storms, and they still have spirits around here.” I was felling strange, I felt rather open, since things could read my mind. But, I was always thinking that I could help these creatures. I wanted to and I needed to. After this, I was kept in this ‘house’ to learn more about Zotan. I guess, I learned a lot, but that was nothing to what I learned in the wild. |
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| Justin G | Jun 17 2005, 02:13 PM Post #2 |
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Welp now that you have our interest you might as well keep going. |
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| Zythion | Jun 17 2005, 02:14 PM Post #3 |
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Thanks, but i need others to get me going again. It takes a bit to think up.
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| Vettore | Jun 17 2005, 02:14 PM Post #4 |
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DON VETTORE
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I think you should carry on.
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| Zythion | Jun 17 2005, 02:22 PM Post #5 |
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I will if there are 3 more people who like this.
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| Dan. | Jun 17 2005, 02:26 PM Post #6 |
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Hi Christine(I am so calling you that from now.) Nice to meet you. Nice, so far.
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| Zythion | Jun 17 2005, 02:40 PM Post #7 |
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ahh. Well, i decided why not, i will continue. ![]() I am doing something frst though.
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| limester816 | Jun 17 2005, 02:41 PM Post #8 |
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What is this anyway? Alter ego? |
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| Zythion | Jun 17 2005, 02:48 PM Post #9 |
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What do you mean? |
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| limester816 | Jun 17 2005, 02:50 PM Post #10 |
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Why is this in brain juice, looks like a story to me. |
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| Zythion | Jun 17 2005, 02:53 PM Post #11 |
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I thought stories came under literature? Does it not? |
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| .ICARUS | Jun 17 2005, 03:02 PM Post #12 |
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though I don't like that narrative...I'm curious so I vote you carry on. |
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| Justin G | Jun 17 2005, 06:49 PM Post #13 |
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Maybe one of the mods can merge this and her other. |
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| Clair | Jun 17 2005, 10:55 PM Post #14 |
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Successful at last.
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Carry on
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| Innocence | Jun 17 2005, 11:02 PM Post #15 |
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我 百鬼夜行を逝
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Continue writing it if it helps you in some way, regardless of whether others like it or not. |
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Thanks, but i need others to get me going again. It takes a bit to think up.



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