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Regret
Topic Started: Jul 13 2005, 12:57 PM (630 Views)
EvilGenius
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http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/20533310/

read comments..... very quickly done.

For the battle against bennettboy14.

not done a peice like this in awhile


EDIT: Sig comments would be nice too.
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The Gunner
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deeffg
Jul 13 2005, 02:53 PM
The Gunner
Jul 13 2005, 07:31 PM
deeffg
Jul 13 2005, 02:18 PM
Boring. Keep trying.

http://www.deviantart.com/view/20467366/ :rolleyes:
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Gj, I like it.

Wow, I actually thought Gunner was smart. But apparently, I have to explain again that you don't have to be good to criticize. I don't know how many times I'll have to say this.

I know that, but you dont have to be so harsh is what im saying, its not helpful.
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deeffg
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The Gunner
Jul 13 2005, 07:58 PM
deeffg
Jul 13 2005, 02:53 PM
The Gunner
Jul 13 2005, 07:31 PM
deeffg
Jul 13 2005, 02:18 PM
Boring. Keep trying.

http://www.deviantart.com/view/20467366/ :rolleyes:
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Gj, I like it.

Wow, I actually thought Gunner was smart. But apparently, I have to explain again that you don't have to be good to criticize. I don't know how many times I'll have to say this.

I know that, but you dont have to be so harsh is what im saying, its not helpful.

'Tis so helping
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EvilGenius
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deeffg
Jul 13 2005, 07:55 PM
FrozenEvil
Jul 13 2005, 07:54 PM
but it is good to put reasons behind why you criticized it

Why do I have to explain the word 'boring'? Unless you are retarded and have a very little vocabulary.

Im not asking you to explain the word boring, i am asking you to explain why my artwork is boring.

And also i dont mind him giving me hard critisism, i would just like a reason behind it.
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deeffg
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FrozenEvil
Jul 13 2005, 08:00 PM
deeffg
Jul 13 2005, 07:55 PM
FrozenEvil
Jul 13 2005, 07:54 PM
but it is good to put reasons behind why you criticized it

Why do I have to explain the word 'boring'? Unless you are retarded and have a very little vocabulary.

Im not asking you to explain the word boring, i am asking you to explain why my artwork is boring.

And also i dont mind him giving me hard critisism, i would just like a reason behind it.

K, the purple just repeats itself over and over and in the background all colour fades. That is why it is boring.
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The Gunner
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deeffg
Jul 13 2005, 02:59 PM
The Gunner
Jul 13 2005, 07:58 PM
deeffg
Jul 13 2005, 02:53 PM
The Gunner
Jul 13 2005, 07:31 PM
deeffg
Jul 13 2005, 02:18 PM
Boring. Keep trying.

http://www.deviantart.com/view/20467366/ :rolleyes:
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Gj, I like it.

Wow, I actually thought Gunner was smart. But apparently, I have to explain again that you don't have to be good to criticize. I don't know how many times I'll have to say this.

I know that, but you dont have to be so harsh is what im saying, its not helpful.

'Tis so helping

Alright, I didnt think id haev to do this but for you I do.
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'Bah' - Not helpful ( Note: This will probably make the user mad, and wanting to start an argument over your post )

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Bah

WTF! BE HELPFUL!

it sucks, not much more to say..


Eventually someone will come in to calm you down, or someone could even be warned.

' Hm..Not the best ive seen, the render is choppy and the brushing needs some touching up, I think you can do better if you try harder. ' ( Note: The member will read it, maybe even quote it saying thanks. )
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I have nothing farther to say to you, if you quote me do so with some intelligence. Please.
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Egomednog
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Could use some color variation, the lighting looks weird. Not really digging the brushing. If you fixed the lighting I can see that render becoming very badass.
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EvilGenius
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i have no clue what u mean by the purple repeating itself..... are you saying i should use other colours? and the background colour fades because its the background, lol

ah posted at the same time as eg, lol

like it said, i didnt spend long on the render, lighting etc it was just somethin quick.

And its one colour because i just added colour balance layer.. time saving

Didnt use much brushing..... got out of touch with photoshop abit jsut doing real life models...
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The Gunner
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Jul 13 2005, 03:05 PM
i have no clue what u mean by the purple repeating itself..... are you saying i should use other colours? and the background colour fades because its the background, lol

I think he means the single colour youve used, it all pretty much looks the same and boring, needs more to it then just that. Soemthign to make it stand out.
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deeffg
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Jul 13 2005, 08:04 PM
deeffg
Jul 13 2005, 02:59 PM
The Gunner
Jul 13 2005, 07:58 PM
deeffg
Jul 13 2005, 02:53 PM
The Gunner
Jul 13 2005, 07:31 PM
deeffg
Jul 13 2005, 02:18 PM
Boring. Keep trying.

http://www.deviantart.com/view/20467366/ :rolleyes:
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Gj, I like it.

Wow, I actually thought Gunner was smart. But apparently, I have to explain again that you don't have to be good to criticize. I don't know how many times I'll have to say this.

I know that, but you dont have to be so harsh is what im saying, its not helpful.

'Tis so helping

Alright, I didnt think id haev to do this but for you I do.
[Example]
'Bah' - Not helpful ( Note: This will probably make the user mad, and wanting to start an argument over your post )

Quote:
 
Quote:
 
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Bah

WTF! BE HELPFUL!

it sucks, not much more to say..


Eventually someone will come in to calm you down, or someone could even be warned.

' Hm..Not the best ive seen, the render is choppy and the brushing needs some touching up, I think you can do better if you try harder. ' ( Note: The member will read it, maybe even quote it saying thanks. )
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I have nothing farther to say to you, if you quote me do so with some intelligence. Please.

I never said 'Bah' and I never will so next time give an example with relevance and intelligence :)
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EvilGenius
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I wasnt even going to put it in ps really, it stared off me just seeing what i could do with a sphere and some deformers in c4d
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Kanashimi
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Deeffg, from what I've seen, has never given a helpful comment. XD He lives to bash. It's a common trend I've noticed. :r

Anywho. I liked it very much. Has a nice feel to it. I'm not the biggest fan of purple, but it looks good here. Very nice job.
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EvilGenius
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I dont like the purple either really.. lol.. it started off as a red in c4d.... but you know how these things go

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Also seen as its my thread, could i get some comments on my sig? not asked for any yet.

I know at the bottom of it the line goes abit funny, but thats just due to the down sizing ( was original large splash size )
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Kookin Keith
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pretty interesting. i dislike the color sceme you used, but i got to respect your skills. might look better with more brushing...or not, not too sure lol.
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