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| Tweet Topic Started: Aug 1 2005, 09:23 PM (121 Views) | |
| Silent Shadow Wolf | Aug 1 2005, 09:23 PM Post #1 |
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This first one I made for my site icon and my Xanga icon, but somehow I think I screwed up the text. I really like the brushing though, credit to this brush set: http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/20759951/![]() This one was also with these brushes: http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/20759951/ Same thing as above, love the background, not too happy with the text. This is for a profile pic on a forums with odd pixel requierments... ![]() Please be nice, I am always looking for help, but not for rude critisim, which I have gotten before on here. I am a bit hesitant to show case my stuff here anymore. I don't mind you saying you don't like it at all, as long as you say why and don't tell me I suck. This is my first attempt at brushes, etc. |
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| EvilGenius | Aug 1 2005, 09:35 PM Post #2 |
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Could use some work, The text is bad on both and ruin the avatars |
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| Silent Shadow Wolf | Aug 1 2005, 09:38 PM Post #3 |
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Well, a suggestion on how to improve would be nice instead of just telling me everything that's wrong with it. Like, should I use diff text styles or colors or blend modes? See what you just did isn't helpful or encouraging. |
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| EvilGenius | Aug 1 2005, 10:05 PM Post #4 |
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well saying the text is bad, is the same as telling you to use a different text really...... oh also the first one could use some colour |
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| Silent Shadow Wolf | Aug 2 2005, 08:21 AM Post #5 |
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Well a suggestion would be nice like, "Hey, maybe don't use script! Or don't use that freaky text on the first one, use script!" |
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| Ghettogaming64 | Aug 2 2005, 09:01 AM Post #6 |
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Okay one suggestion should not bring you down. BTW what he said was true i dont like the text and the first one needs color. Dont let two people bring you down either.
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| Silent Shadow Wolf | Aug 2 2005, 10:58 AM Post #7 |
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It wasn't the suggestion. It was the way he so "kindly" phrased it. Your suggestion would be very helpful if you could tell me WHY you don't like the text? Is it the font face, or did I choose a crappy color? That would be more helpful to me. |
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| EvilGenius | Aug 2 2005, 11:01 AM Post #8 |
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I dont like anything about the text, im just giving you the freedom of choice to change it how you want, its not my art so im not going to tell you what font and what colour to use etc.. |
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| Silent Shadow Wolf | Aug 2 2005, 11:17 AM Post #9 |
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Yes, but if you don't like the color because say it blends too well and is hard to read, I would appreciate to know that so I can figure out how to fix it. I am not asking for people to say "use X font and Y color". It would just be nice to hear, "the color is too dark in my opinion, maybe try something lighter..." I just think that's more helpful than saying the text sucks with no reasoning. |
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| Lividiom | Aug 2 2005, 11:49 AM Post #10 |
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1. The brushing is repetitive and uninteresting. 2. The color (or lack of) is dull. 3. The text is jagged and poorly formatted. 4. The outerglow on the second image just makes the poor quality of the text more conspicuous. 5. The brushing faintly overlaps the border. Make a new layer and restroke it. |
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| Marxist | Aug 2 2005, 01:25 PM Post #11 |
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Agreed. |
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| Fo'rizzle | Aug 2 2005, 04:38 PM Post #12 |
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The text ont he first is okay, but the background stinks on both of them. |
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| Silent Shadow Wolf | Aug 2 2005, 06:07 PM Post #13 |
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How nice everyone is around here. </sarcasm> |
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