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Topic Started: Aug 4 2005, 11:14 PM (294 Views)
Demockracy
punk in drublic
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http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/21380085/
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Fo'rizzle
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Tree needs to be way sharper, very nice, i love it, but a lot of people won't be able to see past how many simple vector shapes you used. I still love it though, Great job.
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Kookin Keith
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Don't ever start looking behind
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2shot
Aug 5 2005, 05:31 PM
Kookin Keith
Aug 5 2005, 03:32 PM
I think the quality of that tree brings it down, seems very blurry

I made it blurry. :S . Apparently, that was a mistake

oh yes lol it contrasts from the style, vectors are supposed to be smooth as silk
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Demockracy
punk in drublic
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Kookin Keith
Aug 5 2005, 06:56 PM
2shot
Aug 5 2005, 05:31 PM
Kookin Keith
Aug 5 2005, 03:32 PM
I think the quality of that tree brings it down, seems very blurry

I made it blurry. :S . Apparently, that was a mistake

oh yes lol it contrasts from the style, vectors are supposed to be smooth as silk

I know. that's why it isn't classified as a vector. I try to mix styles whenever possible. Oh well, judging from the comments, my blurred tree didn't work.

And, thanks Fo'Rizzle
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Fo'rizzle
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Btw, it's that lyrics from a hardcore song? It sounds like it.
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Berserk
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Transgression
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maybe if you placed the birds at a different angle it would look better...i like it though ^_^
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Egomednog
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eihond
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Focal point, anyone?
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EvilGenius
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not bad, just dont like the bluryness of the tree.
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rivulet
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At a first glance it doesn't look too bad, but I could pick it apart with a closer look (I won't).

Suggestions:
-it usually takes a lot of work to blend vectors and raster brushes...if I were you, I'd avoid that combination unless it's totally necessary
-too many defaults, get more familiar with the pen tool and make custom shapes
-in general, this kind of abstract vector is whored too much. I like how you at least have a meaning behind it, but I would practice vectoring realism before expressing yourself through abstracts. think, that's the natural progression of art anyway.
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Demockracy
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Fo'rizzle: Sorta. It's from a hardcore song I wrote.
Beserk: Thanks for the comment
Ego: Yeah... :P
FrozenEvil: Understood, seems to be the common setiment
Rivulet: Thanks for the in-depth comment, I'll definatley try to do some realism pieces soon.
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