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| Rae | Jun 21 2008, 08:24 PM Post #1 |
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just be ræl
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Again a quick one for a request.![]() I like this one.
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| Steve | Jun 27 2008, 05:51 AM Post #2 |
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It's not bad, the main light source is coming from the correct place which is good. But my main gripe in this one is the text, because it just looks like you've plonked it on without any real thought. The border might also look more effective if it was bit thicker, or perhaps if it wasn't there at all. Keep practicing.
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| Arianna | Jun 27 2008, 09:20 AM Post #3 |
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Never settle for a half measure.
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I agree with Steve, but it still looks great .
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| Anxiety16 | Jun 27 2008, 09:46 AM Post #4 |
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I like it all a lot, except for the text.
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| .Greg | Jun 27 2008, 11:30 AM Post #5 |
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I like this, I like the lighting and seem to think nothing of it. And the text is what i would say goes with the whole desgin. Overall its Good. |
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| Sphoenix | Jun 27 2008, 08:14 PM Post #6 |
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drown in the now
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The render is rather choppy and the white dots don't appeal to me, but everything else looks great. Keep it up!
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| sherwood | Jun 29 2008, 01:25 AM Post #7 |
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Rae from Prod networks? Its not bad, but I have definitely seen better from you. |
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| .Achilles | Jun 29 2008, 01:55 AM Post #8 |
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| Crossfire. | Jun 29 2008, 02:02 AM Post #9 |
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I think it's pretty good, except that the dots on the right side are a bit too opaque. Otherwise, nice job. |
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