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intheshadows
Topic Started: Jun 22 2008, 06:34 AM (461 Views)
Jago
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I have become, comfortably numb.
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Another one, I quite like this one.

I did make a lot of versions, like always. :P

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Thanks

Jago.
Edited by Jago, Jun 22 2008, 06:34 AM.
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Journet
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This is a place you'll never know...
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As I said on MSN, I really like these. It flows and the colors are amazing. Good job. :wub:
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Setobeisha
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Just looks like a black background with a stock and a c4d... :/

There's no lighting, no depth, no flow, nothing really capturing my eye. It's too empty as well. Of all these I would have to chose v1. It's the only one that looks like it's on it's way to being a sig. Looks like a WIP more than anything.
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Jago
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It looks better on a dark skin since you can see the details. It's a lot more than what you said though. Thanks for the opinion.
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:wub: I love this one. Third one down is my favorite I think. :D
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Jago
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Thanks for the comment EF. :)
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Jenny
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The third one down is my favourite as well. I love them! :D
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I definitely like the 3rd the most. The green is really nice in this one. Probably by favorite of your's. :)
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Setobeisha
Jun 22 2008, 07:02 AM
Just looks like a black background with a stock and a c4d... :/

There's no lighting, no depth, no flow, nothing really capturing my eye. It's too empty as well. Of all these I would have to chose v1. It's the only one that looks like it's on it's way to being a sig. Looks like a WIP more than anything.
100% agreed.

I have nothing against Jago at all. But I tend to notice people at Wm, PR, GR all run off of biased support.

IMO it looks like a black BG, a render, and a c4d with some lighting adjustments. and im on a dark screen
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Too many versions. :D

I like the tag. It's a little dark, though I think it suits the name well. Very nice job Jago. :)
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Bry
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It's great. The first would be the best if those small pen strokes weren't so over sharpened.



To the people who are complaining: Minimalism is sometimes beautiful. ....And he is talking about a dark background, not your screen.... >_<
Edited by Bry, Jun 23 2008, 01:56 AM.
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Setobeisha
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All I'm saying is it looks like the c4d was put on colour dodge and that makes the c4d pixelated on the edges.

Simplicity is one thing, emptiness is another. I have nothing against anyone, I just critique what I see.
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You need better lighting and depth. To me at least, it looks ridiculously dark and boring. Especially lighting because I can't see the background very well at all...

You say you put a lot of effects in the background, which I can't believe, but even on a dark background I don't think it would look too great. You just need better lighting.

Some people said you had great flow, I personally disagree. The girl just doesn't fit with the c4d's and effects in the bg. Besides, the bg is dark and sharp, and the girl is somewhat blurry to the eye and totally light. It doesn't fit together. It looks more like a nice bg with a render slapped on it.

..good effort...
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They look great. :wub:
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A small light source would imrpove it a lot.

It does look miles better on a dark background though, as you see details you can't view on a light one.
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