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| Jago | Jun 22 2008, 06:34 AM Post #1 |
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I have become, comfortably numb.
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Another one, I quite like this one. I did make a lot of versions, like always. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks Jago. Edited by Jago, Jun 22 2008, 06:34 AM.
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| Journet | Jun 22 2008, 06:48 AM Post #2 |
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This is a place you'll never know...
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As I said on MSN, I really like these. It flows and the colors are amazing. Good job.
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| Setobeisha | Jun 22 2008, 07:02 AM Post #3 |
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Just looks like a black background with a stock and a c4d... ![]() There's no lighting, no depth, no flow, nothing really capturing my eye. It's too empty as well. Of all these I would have to chose v1. It's the only one that looks like it's on it's way to being a sig. Looks like a WIP more than anything. |
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| Jago | Jun 22 2008, 08:25 AM Post #4 |
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It looks better on a dark skin since you can see the details. It's a lot more than what you said though. Thanks for the opinion. |
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| Eccentric Feline | Jun 22 2008, 10:36 AM Post #5 |
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梦想 ツ
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I love this one. Third one down is my favorite I think.
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| Jago | Jun 22 2008, 08:24 PM Post #6 |
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Thanks for the comment EF.
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| Jenny | Jun 22 2008, 08:40 PM Post #7 |
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Retro
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The third one down is my favourite as well. I love them!
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| Deletion. | Jun 22 2008, 08:42 PM Post #8 |
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loldedicated
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I definitely like the 3rd the most. The green is really nice in this one. Probably by favorite of your's.
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| sherwood | Jun 22 2008, 09:39 PM Post #9 |
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100% agreed. I have nothing against Jago at all. But I tend to notice people at Wm, PR, GR all run off of biased support. IMO it looks like a black BG, a render, and a c4d with some lighting adjustments. and im on a dark screen |
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| Nivexonix | Jun 22 2008, 09:41 PM Post #10 |
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Too many versions. ![]() I like the tag. It's a little dark, though I think it suits the name well. Very nice job Jago.
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| Bry | Jun 23 2008, 01:51 AM Post #11 |
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It's great. The first would be the best if those small pen strokes weren't so over sharpened. To the people who are complaining: Minimalism is sometimes beautiful. ....And he is talking about a dark background, not your screen.... >_< Edited by Bry, Jun 23 2008, 01:56 AM.
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| Setobeisha | Jun 23 2008, 02:13 AM Post #12 |
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All I'm saying is it looks like the c4d was put on colour dodge and that makes the c4d pixelated on the edges. Simplicity is one thing, emptiness is another. I have nothing against anyone, I just critique what I see. |
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| Rae | Jun 24 2008, 02:03 AM Post #13 |
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just be ræl
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You need better lighting and depth. To me at least, it looks ridiculously dark and boring. Especially lighting because I can't see the background very well at all... You say you put a lot of effects in the background, which I can't believe, but even on a dark background I don't think it would look too great. You just need better lighting. Some people said you had great flow, I personally disagree. The girl just doesn't fit with the c4d's and effects in the bg. Besides, the bg is dark and sharp, and the girl is somewhat blurry to the eye and totally light. It doesn't fit together. It looks more like a nice bg with a render slapped on it. ..good effort... |
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| Prue | Jun 24 2008, 02:07 PM Post #14 |
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They look great.
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| Anxiety16 | Jun 24 2008, 02:10 PM Post #15 |
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A small light source would imrpove it a lot. It does look miles better on a dark background though, as you see details you can't view on a light one. |
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