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intheshadows
Topic Started: Jun 22 2008, 06:34 AM (462 Views)
Jago
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I have become, comfortably numb.
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Another one, I quite like this one.

I did make a lot of versions, like always. :P

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Thanks

Jago.
Edited by Jago, Jun 22 2008, 06:34 AM.
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Journet
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This is a place you'll never know...
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RaEStaRiZe
Jun 24 2008, 02:03 AM
You need better lighting and depth. To me at least, it looks ridiculously dark and boring. Especially lighting because I can't see the background very well at all...

You say you put a lot of effects in the background, which I can't believe, but even on a dark background I don't think it would look too great. You just need better lighting.

Some people said you had great flow, I personally disagree. The girl just doesn't fit with the c4d's and effects in the bg. Besides, the bg is dark and sharp, and the girl is somewhat blurry to the eye and totally light. It doesn't fit together. It looks more like a nice bg with a render slapped on it.

..good effort...
Looks like you still haven't got over the fact he critiqued your signature and you didn't like what he said? :sigh:

To be quite honest, I've seen quite a few of Jago's PSDs and they're more than what you just say they are. Trust me. ;)
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Akira.
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I wouldn't say it's the best, but it isn't entirely bad, and I can see more effects used than some of you are seeing. They are subtle effects, which are more effective. Maybe since this skin is bright and the sig is dark you can't notice them, but they are there. I like it.
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The effects are very subtle, and I can't really notice the difference enough. The black area just looks dull.
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Rae
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Lewiis
Jun 24 2008, 02:10 PM
RaEStaRiZe
Jun 24 2008, 02:03 AM
You need better lighting and depth. To me at least, it looks ridiculously dark and boring. Especially lighting because I can't see the background very well at all...

You say you put a lot of effects in the background, which I can't believe, but even on a dark background I don't think it would look too great. You just need better lighting.

Some people said you had great flow, I personally disagree. The girl just doesn't fit with the c4d's and effects in the bg. Besides, the bg is dark and sharp, and the girl is somewhat blurry to the eye and totally light. It doesn't fit together. It looks more like a nice bg with a render slapped on it.

..good effort...
Looks like you still haven't got over the fact he critiqued your signature and you didn't like what he said? :sigh:

To be quite honest, I've seen quite a few of Jago's PSDs and they're more than what you just say they are. Trust me. ;)
Wow. What has this world come to. I can't even say what I honestly think about Jago's work?

And anyways for your information I have a typo.

In the second line I say "which I can't believe", and I meant to say "which I can believe"

But I couldn't edit it because I currently have a posting restriction for saying gtfo to Jago in that topic.
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