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| Tweet Topic Started: Jun 23 2008, 05:40 PM (319 Views) | |
| Viral | Jun 23 2008, 05:40 PM Post #1 |
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![]() My second try at EFS, and I think it's a lot better. Comments and suggestions? Edited by Viral, Jun 23 2008, 05:41 PM.
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| Ardy | Jun 23 2008, 11:28 PM Post #2 |
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You have a good concept going, but the sides are rather patchy and choppy. Try smoothing it out? |
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| Lokyr | Jun 24 2008, 09:04 AM Post #3 |
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I'm not particularly fond of the colors but nice design, keep it up.
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| .Achilles | Jun 24 2008, 05:13 PM Post #4 |
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It looks very washed out, and the symbols on the inside of the black area look out of place. Also, it looks a little choppy in some areas. |
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| Anxiety16 | Jun 24 2008, 06:53 PM Post #5 |
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It's extremely choppy. How are you making it the shapes? It looks to me like you're erasing shapes into new shapes. If you are, try using the pen tool, it's a lot better. I suggest adding an inner shadow to the black part, as at the moment it looks very flat. |
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| Deleted User | Jun 26 2008, 08:50 PM Post #6 |
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Looks good but the sides look bad.Give another go on it
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| Arianna | Jun 26 2008, 09:40 PM Post #7 |
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Never settle for a half measure.
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The borders do not flow well with the content, make them the same hue, but darker. |
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