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| tenfoldseven | Jun 26 2008, 01:15 AM Post #1 |
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i'm new.![]() comments plz |
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| Steve | Jun 26 2008, 05:15 AM Post #2 |
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I like the style, but I think the image of the girl should stand out just a little bit more to make her a bit more of a focal point. I would also suggest removing the thick borders on the left and right, because it looks just a bit random. I love the positioning of the text though, and my only complaint is that it's a bit small. Keep it up.
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| Lokyr | Jun 26 2008, 08:08 AM Post #3 |
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I agree with Steve about the focal point - I think you should focus it more on the girl. I really like the colors on this piece though, good work.
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| Arianna | Jun 26 2008, 10:18 AM Post #4 |
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Never settle for a half measure.
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I actually think this is very good , but I agree with what steve just said. Keep practicing.
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| tenfoldseven | Jun 26 2008, 03:44 PM Post #5 |
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thank you |
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| Anxiety16 | Jun 26 2008, 07:57 PM Post #6 |
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Looks great. It's a bit monotone in places though (especially the background).
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| Arianna | Jun 26 2008, 08:42 PM Post #7 |
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Never settle for a half measure.
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The colors are very mixed, so I'm not sure the signature looks monotone at all, in fact looks quite colorful .
Edited by Arianna, Jun 26 2008, 08:43 PM.
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, but I agree with what steve just said. Keep practicing.
It's a bit monotone in places though (especially the background).
4:28 AM Jul 11