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| .tony | Jul 1 2008, 04:40 AM Post #1 |
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![]() Was bored. I think it came out solid but looks like their is too many things going on... :huh: |
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| Steve | Jul 1 2008, 06:45 AM Post #2 |
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Yeah, there's far too much happening, which is resulting in your focal point being cast aside. The text isn't noticeable enough either, and it's far too close to the edge of the graphic. Keep practicing though.
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| Jenny | Jul 1 2008, 06:50 AM Post #3 |
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I agree with Steve about the focal point being cast aside- when I look at the graphic, my eyes are drawn to the bright blue area near Eminem's face. The effects looks kind of interesting, but there really is a bit much going on. I also agree about the text- it's hard to read, so perhaps try to make it stick out a little more? Not bad though, Tony. Did you use GIMP for this one as well?
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| Ardy | Jul 1 2008, 09:37 AM Post #4 |
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I'm with Steve as well. The focal point should be easier to distinguish than it currently is, otherwise I like what you've done. Although the background seems to have too much going on. |
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| .tony | Jul 1 2008, 01:45 PM Post #5 |
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Thanks for the feedback guys. @Jenny - yups gimp again I'm starting to like it.xD |
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| Deleted User | Jul 1 2008, 10:59 PM Post #6 |
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It would be nice if it hada bigger focal I was searching for Marshal for quite a bit |
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| Sonic Wind | Jul 2 2008, 01:56 AM Post #7 |
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Looks nice. You used Gimp? I use Gimp too. |
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