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Art Poem
Topic Started: Jul 31 2008, 02:06 PM (200 Views)
Numark
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recently I have been having a great time writing with no purpose. Some stuff I write is pure garbage, while others tend to be better. However, I can never tell what is good or bad. So it is all good.

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Today I will release my masterpiece
Upon this world to increase
Attention towards my emotions.
I present to you my newest piece of art,
From my gallery; my beautiful heart.
Nothing in the world can best it.

This heart is the smartest art around,
As both love and pain can be found
Inside of this amazing piece of work.
It also has something the world enjoys,
Just by pounding it makes a certain noise;
Bu-Bump, Bu-Bump, Bu-Bump

No art controls me like my heart controls me
As when it stops, so does my body
Without it I am soulless
And when it hurts my body will cry
Till the tears run dry and I wish to die
This art can bleed like no other.

Ladies and Gentleman, Boys and Girls.
I present to you the art of the century,
My heart.
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Fiona
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I like it a lot. I love how you compared the heart to art. Great job. :D
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Arianna
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I agree with Fiona, lovely work :) . I like that onomatopoeia you did :P .
Edited by Arianna, Jul 31 2008, 04:25 PM.
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