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| Rinoa Sig - Any Good? | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Nov 29 2008, 05:37 PM (416 Views) | |
| EvenAngels | Nov 29 2008, 05:37 PM Post #1 |
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Hey everyone, I was just wondering if you could give me some critique on this:![]() The Rinoa image is from a RAR download by Montyoum on deviantart. |
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| sic_design | Nov 29 2008, 05:44 PM Post #2 |
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its very distracting the background takes your eyes away from the render. and the text doesnt match well. its a nice sig, just keep practicing hehe |
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| Raymond | Nov 29 2008, 06:12 PM Post #3 |
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de BULLY
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He said what I was about to say. |
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| sic_design | Nov 29 2008, 06:31 PM Post #4 |
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just another something, everything you make, will look different after you post it. while your making it you know what your supposed to be seeing, you see all the little subtle things you did to the image, but in the end the finish product needs to display those things to the consumer
Edited by sic_design, Nov 29 2008, 06:32 PM.
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| EvenAngels | Nov 30 2008, 08:45 AM Post #5 |
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Alright guys Thank you very much for the critique! Do you think the render should be larger or sharper? Or should the background be duller, or completely different?
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| Rae | Nov 30 2008, 06:18 PM Post #6 |
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just be ræl
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Yea work on flow. Right now it's kinda confusing on the eyes, I don't know where to look. |
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| sic_design | Nov 30 2008, 06:57 PM Post #7 |
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i would try a completely different background. try to make something that will compliment the render. make the render the focus point. and yes the render is a bit blurry around the wings |
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| EvenAngels | Dec 1 2008, 04:35 AM Post #8 |
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Alright, thanks for the tips guys. I'll get working on fixing it. |
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| Dyegov-ZNR | Dec 1 2008, 09:24 AM Post #9 |
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I have to agree that the background is too busy and it takes away the attraction from the render, which should attract the attention. However the effects used look nice. |
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Thank you very much for the critique! Do you think the render should be larger or sharper? Or should the background be duller, or completely different?

4:50 AM Jul 11