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| Viral | Dec 9 2008, 03:52 PM Post #1 |
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Another go at one, completely different style to anything I have tried.
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| Steve | Dec 9 2008, 04:02 PM Post #2 |
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It seems a bit flat to be honest, the depth isn't really there. Obviously stronger gradients would fix that. I also don't think there's enough contrast between the center-capsule and the rest of the image, I would suggest making the center-capsule a slightly lighter shade. The text looks a bit funny in that position too, perhaps move it up a few pixels so that it's centered vertically in the capsule. Keep it up though.
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| Viral | Dec 9 2008, 06:37 PM Post #3 |
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Thanks for the comments. Here's an updated version (I can't move the text though since I applied the image ).
Edited by Viral, Dec 9 2008, 06:37 PM.
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| .Danilo | Dec 9 2008, 07:02 PM Post #4 |
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It's better than the first one, but I think the text area still lacks some contrast. Try using that hue of green you used in the details on the main body. Another thing that's bothering me are those dark blobs near the sides of the text capsule. They go completely against the general lighting of the h2 and made it look strange. I think it would look a lot better without them. Another thing that might contribute overall is lightening borders a bit. Keep it up.
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| Viral | Dec 10 2008, 01:15 PM Post #5 |
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Thanks for the comments. Here is another updated version .![]() EDIT: I've started a print for it: http://aquate.us/u/1802.png EDIT: Updated print: http://aquate.us/u/1207.png Edited by Viral, Dec 10 2008, 06:51 PM.
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