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| Tweet Topic Started: Nov 26 2005, 01:35 AM (331 Views) | |
| Gangstarr71 | Nov 26 2005, 01:35 AM Post #1 |
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Movin On Up.
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I made this about 3 or 4 weeks ago...somethign of the sort. I was going for the feeling of right before collision of two giant planets. I believe it was acheived. CnC is welcome. Thanks.--not my brushes http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/23965682/ Enjoy! |
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| Jayster | Nov 26 2005, 01:57 AM Post #2 |
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The Alchemy Index
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It has no depth and it looks very computer generated. I can also see where the same brushes were used over and over. The planets show no light at all and need to be more detailed. Try looking at some of Alyn Hunter's tutorials on planet creation and starfield creation. |
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| Gangstarr71 | Nov 26 2005, 02:04 AM Post #3 |
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Movin On Up.
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ouch..harsh. Thanks for comments, and I will view these tutorials you have shown me, thanks. |
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| Jayster | Nov 26 2005, 02:05 AM Post #4 |
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The Alchemy Index
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Eh yeah. I apologize for the harshness in that comment, wasn't directed at you. I'm just mad my guitar broke 2 stings and I dont have replacements. |
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| Gangstarr71 | Nov 26 2005, 02:09 AM Post #5 |
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Movin On Up.
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oh that sucks. Its night right now, so you cant get replacements can you..I dunno what to tell you man.. Thanks for the tutorial links though. |
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| Maiz | Nov 26 2005, 02:24 AM Post #6 |
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Lord of all things corn.
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I agree with Jay's comments about the brushes being used more than once and I don't really like the colors but I don't really know much about space scenes so I say follow Alyn's tuts cuz he's really good. |
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| Kookin Keith | Nov 26 2005, 05:22 AM Post #7 |
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Don't ever start looking behind
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it's a start, you just need crap loads of detail added to it and the shadow on the planet is inverted...lol. fix that up |
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| digz | Nov 26 2005, 12:42 PM Post #8 |
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Want to be a sex bunny?
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| olrun | Nov 26 2005, 09:22 PM Post #9 |
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Too many colors, too flashy. Try putting more effort on the smaller things first (making the planets/stars so real) before you go on and add more stuff. EDIT: Thanks for the link, Jay. B) |
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