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Need oppinons
Topic Started: Feb 17 2006, 01:53 AM (329 Views)
winnopeg
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I'm participating in a graphics tournamant elsewhere and I'd like to get some feedback for this "banner" (that's what they want, but it has to be 400x80..). It's not great, and it needs a lot of improvement. I'm just learning. So with your feedback, if you could possibly not just tell me what's wrong but how to fix it, I'd appreciate it.

Here it is. And the subject isn't optional either, though the rendered image could be changed..
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EDIT: Word censors O_o :S :/ Blocking a URL isn't cool..
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looks a bit better, although i sitll dont like the scan lines that much...and wtf is that red dynamite thing sticking out? O_o
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Quality needs some work, for the bg. (If) If you wanted him to stand out, and then have the bg blured so its more effective, I think having it sharpend near the front of where the stock is would look better as the blurstarts at the side. Anyways, good colours, could be alright just some touchups but I like. Work on your text, though
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labrack2401
Feb 17 2006, 06:23 AM
frankly i hate it, you need a different render, get rid of the lines in the bg, and use more abstract brushes layered wit hgrunge brushes

You could be nicer. :/

Anyway, i dont like the background, but good job. :grin:
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winnopeg
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Stpfx
Feb 20 2006, 08:04 PM
looks a bit better, although i sitll dont like the scan lines that much...and wtf is that red dynamite thing sticking out? O_o

It's a scroll..

The Gunner
 
Quality needs some work, for the bg. (If) If you wanted him to stand out, and then have the bg blured so its more effective, I think having it sharpend near the front of where the stock is would look better as the blurstarts at the side. Anyways, good colours, could be alright just some touchups but I like. Work on your text, though

It is blurred, so blur it more? Also, what's wrong with the text? Though it's simple, I personally think it works with it.

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Anyway, i dont like the background, but good job. :D

Um, thanks? :P
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