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By Candlelight.
Topic Started: Feb 21 2006, 07:39 PM (221 Views)
FallenHero
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I don't know if I should have posted it or not, but here's my Love Poem for the contest. I mainly just wrote it because I haven't wrote anything in awhile and I submitted it to get some feedback. Enjoy. - Matt.

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By Candlelight
By candlelight I will lay you down at night,
By candlelight we'll find our heart's delight,
By candlelight our bodies are alight.
In the candle's dim glow,  our heat will grow
In the candle's faint shine, I want to take you as mine
In the candle's warm light, we'll be one, you and I.
We'll make love, in the soft candlelight
And afterword, when the fire is extinguished
By candlelight I'll kiss you goodnight
and tell you I love you, and everything is alright.
And from night to night we'll lay and admire the glow
of the candlelight and remember the passion of that night.
And our hearts will know that our lives are entwined
And by candlelight, we'll unite
as husband and wife.
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zenity
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Wow, just wow. So brillant and I hope you keep writing great poems. I must says this love poem is soo great and so breath taking.
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FallenHero
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Thank you very much. This one was wrote out of pure inspiration.
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John
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Very nice.
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Mister.
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Great job, I love it ^_^
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FallenHero
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Thanks alot everyone. :)
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Monty-Po
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Made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. :sigh:


Very nice work. :)
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FallenHero
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lol, well then. Thank you for the compliment.
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Andrew
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Excellent poem. Made me feel...nice! :)
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FallenHero
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Thank you.
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Fleetcom
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THAT POEM SUCKS
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FallenHero
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Thanks for expressing your opinion in all caps. [/sarcasm]. :)
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