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Topic Started: Dec 10 2006, 06:31 PM (200 Views)
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Please leave comments also;
im new to this site and heard it was full of experience designers.
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Text: It looks really bad. Try different things like adding Gradient Overlays, Color Overlays, Stroke and etc. Also position it somewhere else, it would look much better somewhere other than the corners.

Render: Did you use the Graussion Blur, Lighten technique (Why am I even asking, you did)? It's used Way too much, it would look fine in the background but it looks horrible on the render. Otherwise without that the Render would look good.

Bg: It's okay, but you should add some Curves and maybe a Black & White Gradient to it.

Border: Just stick with a Black border or no border at all. It would look 100 times better.

That's my two cents.
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No focal point and quite a bit messy. Clean it up a bit and add some lighting to the render and you'll be good.
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Dec 10 2006, 10:38 PM
No focal point and quite a bit messy. Clean it up a bit and add some lighting to the render and you'll be good.

Oh yes, add Depth to the render. Make the background slightly blurred and make sure the render isn't. Also add lighting near the focal point (The render as of this Tag).

Lighting:

Layer > New Layer > Image > Apply Image > Filter > Render > Lighting Effects

Keep the default one and pick Omni. Put it at a good position that looks good to you. Once you're done keep it on Normal and adjust the Opacity to your liking.
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decent work the concept was a bit dull also its a bit empty the text could have been a bit better 6.5/10
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