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Rate my lyrics; Please rate my lyrics
Topic Started: Jan 7 2007, 02:51 PM (600 Views)
TeeSee
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fish and chips.. yummy
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Guerilla Warfare120
Jan 14 2007, 07:41 AM
Black youth ARE abused by white people daily.

I agree and that's why I wasn't feeling the first verse...

I liked the new verses you wrote too, especially the last verse.
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punk-emo-rocker
Jan 16 2007, 09:09 PM
Very nice.



I guess no one gives any love for poems, I've put poems in brain juice and nothing has happened. I guess if I call them lyrics people might actually give feedback?

I don't think poems should really go in brain juice, as it is - in essence - a debate forum.
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Rezurrekted
Jan 18 2007, 10:11 PM

I don't think poems should really go in brain juice, as it is - in essence - a debate forum.

No it's not.


I love these lyrics/poems, fantastic job.
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You class poems as literature?
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Guerilla Warfare120
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I like your new one, the rhymin ain't as good as any of the earlier ones but it's overall better.
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punk-emo-rocker
Jan 16 2007, 03:09 PM
Very nice.



I guess no one gives any love for poems, I've put poems in brain juice and nothing has happened. I guess if I call them lyrics people might actually give feedback?

No, it's the opposite. People write poems and call them lyrics..there's no way you could put music behind a lot of the stuff, If its a poem, call it that.
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I think your lyrics are really deepful and very awesome.. :D Love to see more..since I love poems or lyrics although they sound more like poems *no offense* alot ^^;
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