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| TeeSee | Jan 18 2007, 01:05 PM Post #16 |
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fish and chips.. yummy
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I agree and that's why I wasn't feeling the first verse... I liked the new verses you wrote too, especially the last verse. |
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| Rezurrekted | Jan 19 2007, 02:11 AM Post #17 |
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I don't think poems should really go in brain juice, as it is - in essence - a debate forum. |
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| convergent | Jan 19 2007, 02:54 AM Post #18 |
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No it's not. I love these lyrics/poems, fantastic job. |
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| Rezurrekted | Jan 19 2007, 05:09 AM Post #19 |
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You class poems as literature? |
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| Guerilla Warfare120 | Jan 20 2007, 01:11 AM Post #20 |
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I like your new one, the rhymin ain't as good as any of the earlier ones but it's overall better. |
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| GDF | Jan 20 2007, 02:27 AM Post #21 |
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No, it's the opposite. People write poems and call them lyrics..there's no way you could put music behind a lot of the stuff, If its a poem, call it that. |
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| Alastrina | Jan 20 2007, 06:13 PM Post #22 |
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I think your lyrics are really deepful and very awesome.. Love to see more..since I love poems or lyrics although they sound more like poems *no offense* alot ^^;
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Love to see more..since I love poems or lyrics although they sound more like poems *no offense* alot ^^;
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