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| Tweet Topic Started: Jan 17 2007, 12:18 PM (405 Views) | |
| Rose 'n' Rosy | Jan 17 2007, 12:18 PM Post #1 |
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Well today at school, Mt teacher said "Now, We will be learning about love poems. I am sure you have done Romeo and Juilet in year/grade 6. No? Well I have photocopyed some love poems for you too read. Any advice? I am only 13 and I dont know hardly anything about love! |
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| Linkman | Jan 17 2007, 12:20 PM Post #2 |
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it's an illusion.
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Not many people do at 13, just listen to your teacher and ask questions if you are unsure? |
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| Rose 'n' Rosy | Jan 17 2007, 12:25 PM Post #3 |
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Thx I will. |
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| Rose 'n' Rosy | Jan 17 2007, 01:20 PM Post #4 |
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*coughs loudly too get everyones attention* Well here goes: Roses are red Violets are blue (purple really) Your feet stink and his do too! Wola! Lol only joking! When I look at sky, I Smile sadly and sigh. Then I write your name in a cloud, But the wind takes it away in a howl. I write it in the mud, But the rain makes a flood. So the only place for me too write it, Is in my heart where It will always stay lit. ^ what ya think? |
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| .Geeko | Jan 17 2007, 01:54 PM Post #5 |
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I’ve written a lot of poems. Do you wish me to help? |
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| Calabur | Jan 17 2007, 02:02 PM Post #6 |
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Advice: Slap your teacher. Real advice: Kick her, then slap her. Seriously, I personally wouldn't care, it's her job to teach you, and if she expects you to know it all already, then use the above advice. |
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| Leda | Jan 17 2007, 02:32 PM Post #7 |
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cARpE dIEm
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It's been said you should write about what you know... How about a poem regarding the fact that you don't know what love is? Could be an interesting take on the assignment.
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| Patrick | Jan 17 2007, 02:47 PM Post #8 |
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Write a poem on the fact that your trying to search for love? 'the journey of love' your seeking that 'one' to fullfill love in your heart. Would be very good to read something like that in my opinion. |
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| Rose 'n' Rosy | Jan 17 2007, 03:48 PM Post #9 |
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Thx everyone you "Really!" Have helped and I am not being sarcastic! |
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| Calabur | Jan 17 2007, 06:34 PM Post #10 |
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BTW, don't make it rhyme. Rhyming poetry usually signals than it's jolly, and upbeat, if it's about love it won't fit that mood. |
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| Amberon | Jan 17 2007, 06:42 PM Post #11 |
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Winter is Coming
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Please whatever you do - do not do a blazon. ![]() Blazon = Your eyes are the twinkling stars in the dark night sky Your lips, a red rouge of roses amongst your pale face of lillies, etc.
lol no. Ever read a Great War poem?
^ That seems to rhyme.
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| Calabur | Jan 17 2007, 06:53 PM Post #12 |
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I should just not post here. I clearly know nothing about poetry, because I don't even know how that rhymes.
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| Dynamik. (PM) | Jan 17 2007, 07:04 PM Post #13 |
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holy shit look who it is
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One word: Google.
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| Meltdown | Jan 17 2007, 07:06 PM Post #14 |
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The Schtig
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http://www.google.co.uk/search?q=love+poem...lient=firefox-a Results 1 - 10 of about 5,020,000 for love poems Really useful. |
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| John | Jan 17 2007, 07:34 PM Post #15 |
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Please don't double post. I'll move this to Brain Juice since you are now trying to gain constructive criticism for your literature.
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