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| Tweet Topic Started: Jun 21 2007, 12:49 AM (207 Views) | |
| punk-emo-rocker | Jun 21 2007, 12:49 AM Post #1 |
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Buffalo buffalo Buffalo buffalo buffalo buffalo Buffalo buffalo.
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I hate it I hate it The less I see the more I think I'm going crazy I'm on the brink I think just maybe we can connect our link but of course that's something that I can't bring I can't seem to think of why I'm so scared I feel so unorganized yet so prepared I feel like an idiot writting this poem Thinking maybe she'll read it and know what I'm saying I feel like an idiot cause even if she does She'll probably think I'm full of it cause I'm not one that she loves I'm really not an optimist even if I want to be I'd throw the glass half full of water of what I'd normally see half empty It's so damn hard to control my insecurity and no matter how I look at the glass it always looks like she doesn't want to be with me So I'm writing these lines of jumbled words atempting to rhyme and make it clean I'm hoping and wishing that I can live this dream And it's those 3 words that I just want to Scream! ...But of course I'm to scared to let my feelings gleam I'm a weird guy aren't I? comments? |
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| systmfdwn147 | Jun 21 2007, 12:58 AM Post #2 |
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I like it. |
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| punk-emo-rocker | Jun 21 2007, 01:36 PM Post #3 |
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Buffalo buffalo Buffalo buffalo buffalo buffalo Buffalo buffalo.
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Ha, thanks. |
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| Pedro | Jun 21 2007, 03:37 PM Post #4 |
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Haha dude, I actually wrote a poem (in portuguese though) very similar to that one to my ex-girlfriend some time ago. Not similar but you know.. it reminds me of the one I wrote. Good job. ;] |
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| punk-emo-rocker | Jun 21 2007, 03:40 PM Post #5 |
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Buffalo buffalo Buffalo buffalo buffalo buffalo Buffalo buffalo.
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hahaha, that's pretty cool and thank you
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| Bambam! | Jun 21 2007, 06:27 PM Post #6 |
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Really nice song/poem. I like it. :clown: |
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| punk-emo-rocker | Jun 21 2007, 06:39 PM Post #7 |
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Buffalo buffalo Buffalo buffalo buffalo buffalo Buffalo buffalo.
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Ha, thank you very much.
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| .esoteric | Jun 22 2007, 05:26 PM Post #8 |
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Laffy Taffy Rots Your Teeth
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It's alright, kinda corny though. |
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| punk-emo-rocker | Jun 22 2007, 08:04 PM Post #9 |
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Buffalo buffalo Buffalo buffalo buffalo buffalo Buffalo buffalo.
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Haha, I did realize it was a bit corny, but the subject matter is corny, so I did my best. |
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