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What's holding me back?...
Topic Started: Jun 21 2007, 12:49 AM (207 Views)
punk-emo-rocker
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I hate it
I hate it
The less I see
the more I think
I'm going crazy
I'm on the brink
I think just maybe
we can connect our link
but of course that's something
that I can't bring

I can't seem to think
of why I'm so scared
I feel so unorganized
yet so prepared

I feel like an idiot
writting this poem
Thinking maybe she'll read it
and know what I'm saying
I feel like an idiot
cause even if she does
She'll probably think I'm full of it
cause I'm not one that she loves

I'm really not an optimist
even if I want to be
I'd throw the glass half full of water
of what I'd normally see half empty
It's so damn hard
to control my insecurity
and no matter how I look at the glass
it always looks like she doesn't want to be with me

So I'm writing these lines of jumbled words
atempting to rhyme and make it clean
I'm hoping and wishing that I can live this dream
And it's those 3 words that I just want to Scream!
...But of course I'm to scared to let my feelings gleam

I'm a weird guy
aren't I?



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systmfdwn147
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I like it.
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Ha, thanks.
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Pedro
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Haha dude, I actually wrote a poem (in portuguese though) very similar to that one to my ex-girlfriend some time ago. Not similar but you know.. it reminds me of the one I wrote. :P
Good job. ;]
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punk-emo-rocker
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hahaha, that's pretty cool

and thank you :)
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Bambam!
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Really nice song/poem. I like it. :clown:
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Ha, thank you very much. :)
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It's alright, kinda corny though.
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Haha, I did realize it was a bit corny, but the subject matter is corny, so I did my best.
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