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Topic Started: Jun 24 2007, 12:24 AM (130 Views)
punk-emo-rocker
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I find it hard to beleive
that I find it hard simply to
do something that could have me
so happy
I can't beleive what I put myself through

I find it dissapointing to believe
that I can physically push myself through
but collapse when pushing mentally
I need a key
so that hopefully I can tell her soon

I need to get out
Im trapped inside meself
and I'm the only one that can help

I'm the key
I'm my own worst enemy
but I'm also the only friend that can see
the hell I put myself into
and the hell I need to get out of...


I honestly don't like it, at all, and I made it purely from stress of my own stupidity... But I always like any criticism if you think it's needed.
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Mr. Danger
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punk-emo-rocker
Jun 24 2007, 04:24 AM
I find it hard to beleive
that I find it hard simply to
do something that could have me
so happy
I can't beleive what I put myself through

I find it dissapointing to believe
that I can physically push myself through
but collapse when pushing mentally
I need a key
so that hopefully I can tell her soon

I need to get out
Im trapped inside meself
and I'm the only one that can help

I'm the key
I'm my own worst enemy
but I'm also the only friend that can see
the hell I put myself into
and the hell I need to get out of...


I honestly don't like it, at all, and I made it purely from stress of my own stupidity... But I always like any criticism if you think it's needed.

I hear claps.....from my mind.

:yes:

I like it alot. Did you mess up with a girl that could've been yours?
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punk-emo-rocker
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Not really, I just suck when it comes to asking a girl out. And I was hanging out with her a long time yesterday and missed opportunity after opportunity. But, today I'm hanging out with her again, and I'm just going to tell her that I'm crazy about her, cause I was so mad at myself I didn't fall asleep till 5 in the morning, haha.


PS. I also made the poem at like 3 in the morning because I couldn't fall asleep.
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