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Valdez
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Nov 12 2007, 07:56 PM
Post #16
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- DarkAngel013
- Nov 12 2007, 12:32 AM
- Ermacrules29
- Nov 11 2007, 04:53 PM
- DarkAngel013
- Nov 11 2007, 11:52 PM
x.x ack...
Can someone please close this topic? I understand that using the computer generated translation would kill the words in my story so... x.x yeah...
Because people are translating... but like... I don't need it anymore... x.x
What do you think would be different with the story if it was computer translated?
The words are all mixed up and it doesn't even make sense or closely relate to my story. Sure, I can bits and pieces of my story but, it doesn't make sense. D: Like, here's the original: Prologue
Being a winged being can cause problems. One, people despise you since you are class type A. And secondly, people would like to use your powers for their own doing.
You see, there are six class types; A, being the strongest. For example, elves, dragon tamers, people who transform into animals, and angels. Class B are people who have powers, but can harm other people; not in a dangerous way. Classes C are people with part animal instincts. They have cat ears or tails of animals. Class D are people who have strong senses of other people or Demons. Class E is people who can be controlled and have a decent but abnormal power among humans. For example, people who are able to see the future. The last class, class F, are just a wasteful class. Zombies, lowly class Demons or anything that are so easy to control, but in huge numbers.
As you can see, being in Class A can cause problems. Well, for a girl named Sora Serin, being winged can suck big time. One, guys hit on her constantly and two, girls hates her for being so beautiful. From time to time, she would meet people who hate her for her powers.
Her whole family is a pure angel, meaning, she came from a family who all are angels, or winged beings. They hate it whenever one of the fellows winged-being falls in love with another class, or just outside their race. Sora, on the other hand, hates it. Born under strict precautions and strict teachings, strict anything you can think of. When the grandparents finally convinced the parents to let their only daughter to a boarding school so that they can get some rest, Sora was sixteen when she was supposed to start at ten…See the difference?
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DarkAngel013
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Nov 12 2007, 09:08 PM
Post #17
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