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Umbrella
Topic Started: Dec 5 2007, 11:16 PM (147 Views)
Feignt
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and it all fades away
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Tis my first attempt at anything like this. It's visual poetry, so if you don't feel like reading just ignore it. x_x

http://feignt.deviantart.com/art/Umbrella-71450150

I think it went okay. Yes, no, maybe so?
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Kookin Keith
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Don't ever start looking behind
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Pretty cool, I think the words at the top are a little distracting though. I'm guessing they represent raindrops or something? Keep working on the style though, see where it goes.
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Lokyr
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I like the style a lot; though it took me a little bit to understand how to read the top. Maybe next time make it a little easier to read.

Nice job, I look forward to seeing more. :)
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iGraphicate
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Looks nice. I agree with Kookin Keith, the text at the top is a little distracting but I do like it overall. Maybe you could of done something in the background? ^o)
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