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| Tweet Topic Started: Dec 15 2007, 03:02 PM (171 Views) | |
| pmandawg | Dec 15 2007, 03:02 PM Post #1 |
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The Mystery Of Iniquity
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This is a song I made on the program Garage Band for the mac. Tell me if you like it or what i could do to make it better http://h1.ripway.com/Pmandawg8/pmansong.mp3 |
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| Enjoii | Dec 15 2007, 03:08 PM Post #2 |
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D/ling, will comment when done. |
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| pmandawg | Dec 15 2007, 03:27 PM Post #3 |
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The Mystery Of Iniquity
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if you have quicktime it should just play in your browser |
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| Linkman | Dec 15 2007, 04:40 PM Post #4 |
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it's an illusion.
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It's pretty good, but the backround beats and things threaten to get going but never really get any more intense, it feels a bit too much like lounge music, but that's not to say I don't think it's any good. |
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| Locke | Dec 15 2007, 04:51 PM Post #5 |
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That one guy
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It's not entirely cohesive, especially the rhythm instruments. The key changes are also rather awkward. And about the random audience at the end: XD |
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| Klokeebutt | Dec 15 2007, 09:24 PM Post #6 |
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It's alright. It kind of sounds like elevator/hold music. It sounds like 2 or 3 songs mashed together. But it's not complete garbage at all! It's kind of catchy. <3 |
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| Quimby | Dec 15 2007, 10:00 PM Post #7 |
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dood
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I wasn't feeling the drums at the beginning, and throughout most of it. I felt like they stuck out too much and got in the way. I liked the piano though, and the guitar at the end. It's not bad. Good job.
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