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| darkshadow654 | Mar 9 2008, 02:36 PM Post #1 |
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| Steve | Mar 9 2008, 03:56 PM Post #2 |
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The pixel strethch effect just confuses the eyes in my opinion, and the cloud on the left contends a bit too much with the render on the right, therefore leaving no real focal point. The text is also too small, and the line through the middle looks as if it's simply there to take up space. Try working on composition of your graphics to make them look slightly tidier, but keep practicing!
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| Corndog328 | Mar 12 2008, 01:02 PM Post #3 |
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Try darkening the cloud just a bit, and lowering the opacity of the motion blur. I personally think if you dublicated the motion blur area, added a 0.8 (or so) gaussian blur, and set that layer to lighten, it'd look coolio! Nice theme! |
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