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Basic "Fire" Sig; On request of a friend
Topic Started: Mar 9 2008, 11:23 PM (162 Views)
Jdawg140
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Just looking for some C &C, Haven't made a sig in awhile so I'm a little rusty.
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Steve
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The way in which you've used several bright parts on the image draws the attention away from the main focus of the signature, which is the render. I would suggest increasing the brightness of that to create more of a focal point. The font choice isn't great either, because it's hard to read the text. It also dosen't flow particularly well with the rest of the graphic.

Keep practicing though. :)
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Jdawg140
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Mar 10 2008, 07:35 AM
The way in which you've used several bright parts on the image draws the attention away from the main focus of the signature, which is the render. I would suggest increasing the brightness of that to create more of a focal point. The font choice isn't great either, because it's hard to read the text. It also dosen't flow particularly well with the rest of the graphic.

Keep practicing though. :)

I agree with the text portion of it, however it was a request to be done with that font.

I'll look into the brighter part of it, thanks.
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Pheonix
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Steve
Mar 10 2008, 07:35 AM
The way in which you've used several bright parts on the image draws the attention away from the main focus of the signature, which is the render. I would suggest increasing the brightness of that to create more of a focal point. The font choice isn't great either, because it's hard to read the text. It also dosen't flow particularly well with the rest of the graphic.

Keep practicing though. :)

You pretty much summed up everything I was about to say. Perhaps make a regular signature size? Like 400x100, 400x120, 400x150, or something normal. :sigh:

Keep practicing, it's not bad considering you're rusty.
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That's pretty nifty. I like the colours ^_^
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Jdawg140
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Mar 10 2008, 03:15 PM
Steve
Mar 10 2008, 07:35 AM
The way in which you've used several bright parts on the image draws the attention away from the main focus of the signature, which is the render. I would suggest increasing the brightness of that to create more of a focal point. The font choice isn't great either, because it's hard to read the text. It also dosen't flow particularly well with the rest of the graphic.

Keep practicing though. :)

You pretty much summed up everything I was about to say. Perhaps make a regular signature size? Like 400x100, 400x120, 400x150, or something normal. :sigh:

Keep practicing, it's not bad considering you're rusty.

Originaly I had it as 330x110 (I like that size) but I wanted to keep the neat design on the render's stomache.

Thanks for comemnts.
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The render is way to contrasted or over blended with th bg. I suggest that you use a overlay, normal and play with the opacity.
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The background is amazing! the render could use a good 'ole gradient map but it isn't all that big of a deal. The size/layout is kinda awkward as well. I'd say reduce the height and lengthen it a bit.
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